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the union of earth and water

c'mon let me unite my water
with your earth
I'll trickle it in
drop by drop
mixing it with your earth
liquifying it
while I watch your hands
mix it up slow

then I'll join you in
the kneading of the mud
hands touching and sliding
electrifying the moistness
sending signals
shivering down

then mudslide over
my body
see if you find out
how my skin is woven
and I'll mudslide
into yours
gathering the signals
that will make the world explode.



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  • elemental angel
    January 13, 2007
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    Thank you entering my contest, I like what you have done here. All the best and Good luck