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Heaven’s Picture of Love

Joyous tears you've granted upon me
Heaven's picture of love I find in thee

My heart cries out; I need you to know
Upon my demeanor I struggle to show

How can I relate with only mere thought?
Priceless gifts bestowed; true love caught

Dreams and fantasies buried deep inside
Releasing as I become your Sweet Bride

Marrying thee and becoming your wife
Fulfills my dreams of a fairy tale life

Trials and tribulations I'm sure we'll see
But together with love we'll set them free

Harmony and bliss will occupy our home
Content and happy no desire to roam

Blessed with laughter and children galore
Above the rooftops our blessings do soar

Once again I find myself desperate to express
Searching for the perfect words to profess

Dear to my heart, shall you forever remain
Ruler of this kingdom; love's precious domain

I thank God for granting my fairy tale true
I love you, My Sweet Knight; forever, "I Do"

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  • Cannonsfire gold member
    April 2, 2007

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    Your heart shines in this, glad Mat told me to come and peek, he said I would enjoy and he is not wrong, I do so enjoy a poet who can let their heart speak Love, C

  • the Angel in Hell
    January 14, 2007
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    good

    I like this piece, its well written and has a nice flow. good luck


    • SandyToo
      January 21, 2007
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      Thank you. I'm just a romantic gal that tends to write from the heart.