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Love of One Dove

Within my heart today there is love.

In the silence of the bay there are doves.

And in the cove by the bay they flutter above.

My heart yearns for the love of one dove.

The distance between my one and only love are miles above.

We have shared special moments of our love.

The time we have spared above.

Our hearts grow founder as we have cared for each others love.

Miles apart will never harm our love we have together.

My heart grows founder as the days pass with my love of the dove.

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  • Naznomarn
    January 13, 2007

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    Whoo! I'm the first commenter!
    Anyways. Very beautiful piece. A welcomed change to the "emo" stuff. I prefer this kind of emotional thing
    The doves sound good.


    • expressd1
      February 3, 2007

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      expressd1

      Thank you for your review on my poem. I really do appreciate it. I used to write quotes when I was around 14 years old. Since then, I haven't written anything at all. I have recently found my soul mate and that is what inspired me to write poetry. Have a great day!! Naznomarn.