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Natasha

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Natasha

A special child, our little girl
A gift from far above
She dances with a little twirl
Natasha’s filled with love

Some people call it autism
They say that she is wild
For our Natasha its altruism
From an inward loving child

What’s in your little head my dear
You know you bring us joy
If I could only take your fear
You wouldn’t be so coy

So darling know we’re here for you
No matter what they say
The joy you bring is O so true
You brighten up our day

We love you Natasha

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                               by: Amera Eileithyia

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  • Manoura xx
    January 24, 2007
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    I looooved this...Natasha must be really special.. BYE!!!!!!!!!!


  • Gods only child
    January 23, 2007
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    great


  • soldiersoul gold member
    January 14, 2007

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    It takes a special Elf to leave such words for a Child to Explore,
    Thoughts Her own in a world that lacks understanding tis Thee who shows Her the Door.
    Guide Her through and into Life we follow behind You in Our Praise,
    We open Our Doors as well thanks to You, Our Kisses blown to You Little Elf, as Natasha lovingly Waves.


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    January 13, 2007
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    Nice ,sweet ..

    But I did'nt really get it


  • Aeonna
    January 13, 2007

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    awesome

    this poem is beautiful, certainly beyond all words...
    excellent write....

    red roses


  • Snappy - Doodles
    January 13, 2007

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    Simply Lovely

    Very nice indeed. The flow is excellent. This is a very heart felt write from you to Natasha. You have a very sweet and kind heart to do something like this. Love the picture.

    ~Snappy~


  • Butterfly Kissed
    January 13, 2007
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    This is so beautiful. Great job on every part of it.


  • martinezjjoe
    January 13, 2007
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    a very sweet and very thoughtful srite


  • EnvisageRed
    January 13, 2007

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    Oh my GOD! I love this.. it is beautiful. Even the picture/backing for it. I wanted to cry it was so heartfelt, sweet and beautiful. Lucky family all around, I would say. Blessings to you. Wonderful read.


  • Maya Lyubenova
    January 13, 2007
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    Very Good

    That's great, the flow is excellent and the rhyming pairs ~ good. A lovely poem for a lovely child!


  • Firequeen
    January 13, 2007

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    this is beautiful
    truly beautiful
    i like lexie have no words.
    so touching
    beautiful.
    Fire


  • manoguru
    January 13, 2007

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    i don't know who the people in concern are... but it surely brings a smile on the face. the poem makes me feel beautiful... and since it is childrens poem, to me the poem feels like it is has been addressed to the child in our heart, and i am glad that someone is there to love us no matter how we are... execution of the poem is flawless, with its simple rhymes and tender message.


  • Cannonsfire
    January 13, 2007

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    This is such a delightful poem from your own sweet elfin heart to another who although she as you describe is inwards child, she brings out the most remarkable show of love and affection, that is truly lovely. She is your gift from above for all of you.


  • Fire N Ice
    January 13, 2007

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    I have no words...

    I'd like your permission to print this so i can frame it and put it in her room,
    Thankyou so much beautiful,
    this is truly touching, you have a heart way too big for just one person,
    with love
    Lexie


    • Amera gold member
      January 13, 2007
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      You sure found it quick. Of coarse you have my permission; it was written for you and your husband.

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