Son-of-a-bitch; I cannot believe I fell for the 'Ol Plastic Wrap Seduction' idea.
Who in the Hell thought of this, anyway?
Some moron, just like me, no doubt.
Didn't they know this would happen? Why would they... I didn't.
Was that the door? Please let that be the door.
What if he finds me wrapped up like this? I'll never live it down.
Who cares... at least you'd live; Idiot!
Why is he taking so long?
Because you left notes for him to read on his way up...
Damn It... Why did I leave notes?
You didn't know you'd be struggling on your carbon monoxide, half-wit.
Ahhhhhhhhh.......... Hellllllppppp........... Hellllppppp...........
He can't hear you! Save your air.
That's that top step; he's almost here... I'm saved.
Nooooooooo......... don't take a shit now!
A contest entry
- "I didn' t do it. Must have been my evil twin" by Werewolf Avarus.
300 points, ended January 16, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Awesome
Uniquely witty with just the right show of panicky drama...loved it!
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LOL...it's an interesting debate, sort of suicidal and sort of autoerotic, expect for the 'shitting' part. It makes me wonder if one went a little overboard with the Suran Wrap..it's great.
Shalli
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*giggles* this is a funny but twisted write good work and good luck!
wolf
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Wow...
We thought sort of alike. I can feel the panic and the pain in yours...and the disbelief that you let yourself be conned into this. Well done.
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Wow ... this is kinda different ... but good ... nonetheless ... it's a very interesting write ... very good form ... and a wonderful expression of emotion ... beautifully done ... good luck in the contest
standing ovation
smile, it confuses people
sparkeh
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