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High Horse

Fucked up feelings in my head
Feeling down because your mad
Why do we~treat eachother bad

You act so high
Apon your horse
Acting it seems~with no remorse

What you say
And how you act
Hits me hard~just like a slap!


Dark-Princess

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Friendship is hard sometimes!

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  • queenie
    March 3, 2007

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    very strong and very expressive.you stand up for your feelings and that is hard.it is a very straight forward point of view and it doesn't waver.it shows strenght and conviction.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    You sure expressed your feelings here crystal clear, and though it was a short piece, I liked it, straight to the point! Nice job, and thanks for reading me as well. Hope you feel better soon. Relationships can be so hard sometimes, and others, great! Peace, here's sending you much love sweet soul. -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • FifthDove
    January 25, 2007
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    Words can cut deep and leave the biggest scars,
    Good poem Tam


  • queen Moderators member
    January 12, 2007
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    Words can hurt worse than anything