As I reflect on
betrayals and deceptions
I watch my rainbow fall into the abyss
In a list
A contest entry
- What you feel # 19 by Gypsy-Princess.
390 points, ended January 13, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow
Love this!
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But rainbow returns with new spring rains
Refreshing renewing in hope light glory and love
That the past is washed away
with new day in store to reap the glorys
of all possibilities
Let decpetion flounder on the dry river banks of despair higher ground is calling to climb and seek out new vistas of love and mankinds true virtue
The abyss has become but the bottom of the staircase
with golden steps reaching ever higher to love enlightenment and new found knowledge of true hearts
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but...but...where is the pot of gold then?
Well done gf....you never cease to amaze me. -
This is such a unique take on the picture. Very creative! thanks and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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