I’ve reached a dead end road
This pain
I deal with
Each day
So new and yet so old
Rip me, love me, rape me
Rain will fall, stars will fall
And I will survive
Or maybe not?
All this pain
That you caused
Follows me until today
Will time heal those wounds?
Scar me, hate me, choke me
Will I stand?
Or will I fall?
Tears flow down my cheeks
Falling into the black abyss
The lights are out
In darkness I’ll crawl
Stab me, lie to me, suffocate me
And so here I die
With the last breath
I say ……
Good bye
A contest entry
- Dark~Like~Me by Dak.
550 points, ended January 24, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Use me,Screw me,but you don't fool me by ExpectingMommy18.
600 points, ended March 1, 2008, 28 entries
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What do you think??
Comments
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wow this was wonderful i really enjoyed reading this. i have felt this way at times and you did a great job expressing what you feel,
thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. -
So strong, dark and such finality. I really like this poem, and I love the style you wrote it in. I cannot give you favorite lines, because I like all of them. Thank you for entering.
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Wow... so, Final.
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