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Tick , Tick, Tick

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I sit here
with the constant ticking
of that damned clock

I try to get up, I can't
TICK, TICK, TICK

I have to get that sound out of my head
TICK, TICK, TICK

Why does time torture me this way?
TICK, TICK, TICK

I open my mouth to scream,
but nothing comes out
TICK, TICK, TICK

I cover my ears, as my body
starts to shake
TICK, TICK, TICK

My eyes fill with tears
TICK, TICK, TICK

That errant whore time, has trapped me
TICK, TICK, TICK

I never heard the ticking
until you walked out the front door

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  • Northern Downpour
    February 3, 2007

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    I like this. Luckily I have a digital clock.. THAT BLASTS THAT DANG SOUND AT 5:30 A.M! =/. Well done, nice picture and expression. Best wishes in the contest ,
    ~Pixie~

  • Turntablism
    February 3, 2007
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    nice nice

    well done

    love mac


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 13, 2007

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    Tick Tock tick tock.... that dam clock is driving me nuts... lol This is a nice take on the pic provided. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for entering and best wishes,
    Frogz~

  • Frozentearz gold member
    January 12, 2007

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    OOh how we can hear the tick of the clock when the halls fall empty, feeling your point within this write
    thanks for sharing
    warm thoughts
    Frozentearz