You are
my distant dream,
my knight
in a not-so shining armor...
I swear that
-in the chaos of calm-
I hear your voice
vibrating in verve,
bearing a promise of peace,
telling me to wait...
[and no,
I am not delusional]
So here I am,
on the edge,
-right where you want me to be-
always anticipating,
like a woman
on the verge of an orgasm.
In the wait,
my pupils dilate,
my heartthrobs accelerate,
and you,
-my love-
you're always late.
You are ruthless,
starving my soul
for solace that never comes.
Eyes yearn for sleep,
Years yearn for closure,
and I only yearn for you.
Deprived,
underprivileged,
I curse my pitiful state,
yet,
I still believe in providence,
I still believe in fairietales,
I still believe in you.
And for the gullible girl I am,
I blame you
and I hate you,
I hate you with a passion-
a passion
too intense,
too intoxicating,
it stifles my solitary soul.
But suffocation
fails to steal
my determination to find your face.
So,
alone,
alone,
all alone,
I lay here and wait.
Please tell me what you think
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May you find peace is solace
Love, Brian -
... i know what u mean. loved the feelin behind this poem.. maybe in my suffocated dream i translated 1 similar point, the fear of him to be an illusion and the everlastin anticipation to find what completes us.
hana i love ur work.. an amazin person... definitly!
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"And for the gullible girl I am,
I blame you
and I hate you,
I hate you with a passion-
a passion
too intense,
too intoxicating,
it stifles my solitary soul."
ur just ... wow!
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see, i wish i can write my lines with such a simplicity and make them so intensed,wonderful and meaningful ..
this is a straighforward piece yet sooo ... argh!!!
u got it right?!
loved it!!!
miss u
me
xxx
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"yet,
I still believe in providence,
I still believe in fairietales,
I still believe in you."
"and I hate you,
I hate you with a passion-"
ya weyleh hana...god you're amazing ! how do you that?! it's just...i donno hana ! this just took me "there"...you know where !
see i'm so overwhelmed i'm blabbing like a fool !
wow
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"like a woman
on the verge of an orgasm.
In the wait,
my pupils dilate,
my heartthrobs accelerate,
and you,
-my love-
you're always late."
Breath-taking
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This is just you Hana...so wonderful ...and he will find you...as you write toward light and know that every thing means something...I am always glad to see you passion flare...and touch me in that place we new last summer...so I love this poem...and I know you will be such a stong woman filled with every dream we danced across our lines together...and soon our book will be out, as I have sent everything in...and I will let you know...as soon as they let me know...
and I do miss the writing...
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speechless
will be back later..
~rana~
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hana everytime i read one of ur poems it gives me d chill ur a poet full of sensuality and feelings wether u like it or not play aloof if u want but no matter what ican see the real u and i love u so much it is awesome loved everyword but i can only relate to this 
So,
alone,
alone,
all alone,
I lay here and wait.
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