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Birthday, A Virtual Bouquet...

 

Here is a special birthday wish
To last you all year long
A wish of health and happiness
And food and fun and song

A wish that all you ever want
Will show up at your door
And you won’t need a single thing
Ice-cream and cake galore

So have a happy birthday Liz
Shine on your special day
A partner in crime, sends you love
And a virtual bouquet

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  • Cupcrazy
    April 5, 2007

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    You've been hoodwinked!

    What a wonderful piece sweetie, beautiful display, grat form and flow filled with your affections. Loved it hun and I hope you are well, I haven't seen you for a long time and miss you much. Lov, Bunny


    • FifthDove
      April 6, 2007
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      Thank you very much for the look-see and comment and applause
      I appreciate itDove


  • -LizBTropez-
    April 2, 2007

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    I agree with this getting gold. It was lovely, and you seemed to know my wishes quite well. Congratulations!


  • January 31, 2007
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    Great for a Birthday card.

    Fun and light and meaningful.


  • Partners In Crime
    January 24, 2007
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    This is so darn good


  • countrybabe gold member
    January 16, 2007

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    Well Done

    Well done on this piece, you have a great talent for writing this sort if thing. Good luck to you in this contest my friend.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 13, 2007
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    a butiful Birfday wish......smiles ~cheeky~


  • -LizBTropez-
    January 12, 2007
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    A lovely poem, anda lovely background. And the graphics between the stanzas are nice eye candy. Thank you for taking the time to write me such a nice birthday wish!

  • Warrior7
    January 12, 2007

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    Sweet

    Just beautiful Dove, Queen is right it definately is a hallmark quality. Liz is going to love this poem.


  • queen Moderators member
    January 12, 2007

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    This is hallmark quality for sure good luck in the contest

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