Walking into this heavy burdened crowd
I see people with smiles but sad eyes
As if their soul is crying out loud
Holding up their lies
Wishing to share just a glimmer of hope
So they can see there’s more to life
To breathe and let go of the rope
And step away from the knife
Love can come in various ways and forms
Yet not being able to hold on and see
That hope in Christ is in the storms
Lord no matter what…
Use me.
Author notes
There are so many hurting people, and I wish I could help everyone - - - but the realization of that is saddening.
Please tell me what you think
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An enjoyable write...
An enjoyable write; since there are so many hurting people, we must learn not to not behave as the religious fools depicted in the story of the "Good Samariatn"; nicely done. The ending reminds of a poem of mine - it is called "Nakednes of Life"; maybe you would like it. --Joe
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I think all of us are hurting in some ways!!! it is just how badly or how long or something!!! Good write! If you keep writing like this you will be able to help alot of people lol good job
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