Whispered words that tantalize
warm thoughts rush in with your kiss
as the tenderness of your touch
sighs of pleasure and bliss.
Hand in hand we walk together
whispered passions rising high
our need for one another evident
see love glistening in our eyes.
Lay me down upon the sand
aroused by our soft fingertips
as our hands roam in delight
the sweetness of my honey drips.
Trembling fingers softly touch you
moans and sighs fill the night
lowered head tasting your passion
everything just seems so right.
Wetting my lips as I stroke you,
as you probe deep, my juices flow
warm lips upon each other
longing for release kissing slow.
My eyes never leave yours
as my strength slides inside
slowly we climb that mountain
'til all our passions subside.
Your strong arms around me
wrapped once more in tenderness.
the sweetness of love still lingers
with your kiss and sweet caress.
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Thanks once again Sandy
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Beautiful
This is a very beautiful romantic ann sensual write, you a paint a picture very well of shared love and paaion, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Rain
Thanks for the read and comment
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Awesome
Wow!! what can one say to something so wonderful as this collab write! It oozes with sensuality and passion.It is full of great visuals. It tells a beautiful story, one that is easily understood.You two guys have just given us readers a wonderful journey into a lustful encounter of two beautiful people sharing their love of one another.
JUST AWSOME!!!
Take care and many blessings to you both.
Angel.
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A very well written poem with nice thoughts lingering. Beautiful.
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This write is sensual and very passionate. Thanks for sharing. Great Job!
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This was a beautiful write, very loving well done.
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A very sensual write and so nicely penned.
Blessings,
Azlyn
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a very beautiful and tanterlizing poem you have created a great image with this poem well done its brill
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Wonderful
I love this. I always like soft sensual writes and wonder why more people don't see and understand the difference between that and porn. We all like the outcums of the act why not make it pleasurable all the way through? Pen on...
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Nursey
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I am sorry please forgive me I forgot to mention a shout out to your lovely collaberator.
Again this was a pleasure to read, and now that I see that it was a collab it is seemlessly entwined writings.
Both your inks blend so well
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Wow I =do love the soft driven passion here here is a bit of the wholesome side in this poem, as well as a bit of the devilshly wicked between the lines
much enjoyed
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this is an awesome write that you have penned together... well done
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WOW! This piece is incredible.... Both of you have came together with sheer talent... and deep passionate pens. Wonderfully done!!!
Sandy
I am shocked 
no just teasing... only amazed... wow!
Always,
Mel
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Thank Melanie for your comments
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A pure delight! Two talented poets blending inks is such a beauty to behold....great job guys.....a pleasure to read....smiles, Terry
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Jeepers, warn a girl, why don'tcha??? 
Beautifully penned... 
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Precious-
You two are Adorable and I Love Your collaborations~
Keep that ink flowing and the Love going~
for it Inspires others to want to spread the Love
even more~
Thank You both for sharing Your Talent and Passion~
Much Happines to both of You this New Year!!
Many blessings too~
and best wishes always
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire
Thanks so much for you comments
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