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live now, laugh always,love forever

i give my all
and all people do is make you fall
people hurt you just to make you cry
that is when you learn it is time for goodbye
you give in and you give up
but i have learned the only way from bottom is straight up
you fight and you cry
and you give so much and they make you wanna die
thats when you learn its all for the best
and you say to hell with the rest
you forgive and for get
and hope like hell they regret.
so you learn the best is out there
and you will find some one who will truly care
so dont give in and dont let up
press on and you will come up
dont let anyone tell you cant because you can
stand up show every one that you are a man
show the world where you are
because because you are the best by far
live   laugh love
now always for ever

Author notes

live                 laugh                      love
now                  always                   for ever

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  • alwaysnforeveryours
    March 25, 2007
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    VERY GOOD

    I thought that this poem was really really good. Keep up the great work!


  • Love-Your-Memory
    February 2, 2007

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    very nice

    This poem is very encouragin and you make a very good point in this poem. Great write! Loved it!

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