How Can you be so blind
that you can't see the thousand tears;
overflowing the floodgates in my eyes
Just because your not here.
Let me ask you one question
And please answer truthfully from the bottom of your soul;
Was it all just a wellmade, well rehearsed, well played part?
or are you really a heartbreaking asshole?
You have absolutely no idea
how shattered i was how far i fell;
When one day you decided i wasn't good enough
And you threw me into this deep dark hell.
Would it have killed you to stay
or to atleast take time for a single call?;
of course it would've you were too busy
building this painful cutting wall
No longer will I cry over
The wounds and still bleeding scars
i'm finally letting out my heart
from it's inprisonment behind bars.
Author notes
2)Write a poem to your ex-lover, expressing your hatred and disgust towards what they have done to you. Rant, rave, curse... I don't care. Just let the feelings go!
"Amy Lee is God"
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A contest entry
- Passion and Pain by Immortal Obscurity.
525 points, ended January 15, 2007, 18 entries
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875 points, ended December 29, 2007, 58 entries
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Comments
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amaaazing write!! i love it, so heartfelt!
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This is so sad and so well written I love it!Good Luck in the contest!
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Well done, my friend! I could definitely feel the anger in this poem, and I hope that whoever did this to you gets their just desserts in the end. Awesome, strong write, all the way through. Best of luck!
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