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A pair from CIA

A pair from CIA
Is out for a meal
They both are such
A huge mystery
Secret agents
Not together at work
The girl says she's a waitress
The man says he's a doc

But they both know
That's not real
They both think
The other's the foe
So they've both been told to
End this up
And each of them
Tries to kill his pair

And back at the beginning
They are out for food
A pill in the girl's wine
Puts an ending to her life
The man finishes his mission
With such a big success
But he has no idea
About that bomb that's in his bed

Both following guidelines
By their big man
Just like two plastic dollies
With a lever on the back
They both went away
But don't do the same
And be a bit careful
With the guidelines you take

Author notes

"granite"

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    January 16, 2007
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    Interesting

    I love contests like this where each poet writes a poem on the same picture and to then see the various forms of inspiration.

    You have written an interesting poem and I can see the direct link with Mr and Mrs Smith.

    Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance.

    Rosemary


  • Kali-Mus
    January 12, 2007
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    hmm, it sounds like mr. and mrs. smith type of thing to me


  • Ima survivor
    January 12, 2007

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    Wow, I've never seen Mr. and Mrs. Smith but now I'm a bit interested in watching it. Nice work, I loved the bomb under his bed (another reason I'm interested in watching this now) ^-^ Keep writing