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Longing fingers

Closed eyes
Spread nostrils
Blind fingers walking

Sniffing the surface they feel
The sweetness of god’s sweat
The quickening breath of excitement

Caressing fingers explore
Wonders of touch and sensitivity of words

Dash of emotions
Makes the skin crawl

Longing fingers climb on the top of the lips
Carrying a message encoded in a kiss.

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  • joshuap
    January 14, 2007
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    This is good writing.You've done an excellent job as usual.You are simply great.I've begun to like your writing.And please can I add you to my list of fav's?

    God Bless You
    Josh