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Blameful Eyes

People looking, people staring,
People judging...

Looking at a poor soul with blameful eyes,
Pointing, laughing, mocking -
Where has mercy gone?

Was it not said that "thou shall not bear false witness"?
Then what do I see around me here,
people, angry and crying?

People struggling, people  competing,

Aren't we all the same?

God made us one to be united,

Yet still there are those who cry,

still there are those who try to be the best -

Pushing hard and stepping over,

those whose eyes are straight and right.

 

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  • momobear09
    January 19, 2007
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    great

    i see people like that everyday i love the fell of this poem "the truth"


  • StarEyes
    January 12, 2007

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    And how right you are!!! If there were people in this world that thought like you, then maybe, one day, it will be a better world to live in! We can only hope!! Keep that pen flowing!