Feeling alone, left, and rejected
Struggling for air, needing hope
Almost close to giving up in my life
Not understanding a lot of things
A big hole in my heart, so confused
Everything changed when Gennelle came
Gifts increasing, growing stronger
Each day there is a reason to arise
Even if I wake up each day for Gennelle
Then I would say that day is important
She is my everything to her I owe my life
Bowing down -
Knowing everything she says is right
Never turning wisdom away from her
Sometimes puzzled and confused
Yet she is patient, then teaches
My Goddess, the shinning light in my life
Without her I would be nothing
I can only hope that words I say -
Things that I do
Everything is a testimony of her in me
May my life be a light that honors her
Author notes
This is for Maatkara because tonight she really helped me with something that no one else has been able to help me with so I wanted to thank her for it
Background is by Maatkara
http://allpoetry.com/Maatkara
Please tell me what you think
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Such devotion, such passion
everyone should have someone like her in their lives -
This is a b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l. poem, even tho i'm not this religion it's interesting to see how other people think about this kind of stuff and plus there are all ready to many christian poems out there great job!
"I can only hope that words I say -
Things that I do
Everything is a testimony of her in me
May my life be a light that honors her"
wow. great e.v.e.r.y.t.h.i.n.g!
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What a beautiful testament of love,
A shining light for you to help you find your way out of the dark,
Just a beautiful poem with real emotion on display for us all to see,
I loved it, really well done,
Thanks for sharing this with us,
Brenden
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Coo
great poem and i too thought u were speaking about an actual goddess...it was a great poem. -
i really like this! at first i thought it was an actual goddess, i was like wow, never heard of this one. and "everything is a testimony of her in me, May my life be a light that honors her." very powerful ending.!
victor
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Thoughtful...
I like this piece. You know, I thought about reading your poems before and I swear I had o.O I don't know anymore though. This is nicely written, though. I like the flow of it and the meaning behind it. It's a grand write, Kari, for a dear friend. Beautiful and touching.
Love always,
Kristen
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aw
aw this is so touching, what a beautiful write,
well done,
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Beautiful
I feel your passion and dedication to Maatkara...she is blessed to have someone that feels so strongly for her...beautifully written...you move me... -
Kari this is a lovely poem that you have penned here well done dear poet
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This is a great poem Kari, as an outsider who knows nothing of your friendship you really illustrate a strong bond. I really like the line, "Everything is a testimony of her in me."
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This is a beautiful write, the fact that it's about a friend makes it even more beautiful!
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Nice! It's really important to let friends know how important they are in your life. There needs to be more good in this world, so appreciation is really necessary.
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Although I don't know what happened to you and I may not understand what was going on I appreciated the poem in all of its beauty. please accept my applause
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I'm glad that you found some strength through Maatkara. I saw that something was bothering you recently, yet I didn't know what, or if I could do anything to help you. I hope you know that people here really do care about you, and are more than willing to extend a hand to help you through your hard times.
I hope you continue to drive forward Kari...and that you'll come to understand how others really see you...as a shining ray of goodness
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What a wonderful tribute and thank you to an obviously wonderful friend. Well done. Glad I clicked
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i think your poem is awesome its kind of hard to comment on such a deep meaningfull poem all i can say is that its great
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I really loved the love that went into this!!!!
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Gennelle is definitely a beautiful, loving heart, and this poem is so lovely. She deserves your love and appreciation, and you deserve the love she gives you. Love, Grandmama
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Yeah - She's like a Teacher, Mother-figure, Priest Of The Heart, and I could go on n on
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oh wow kari! this is wonderful. i can really feel it. it jst brings out her beauty so much much more. great job. she'd b proud i know it kari!
madhu
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woot woot
all hail the scribe! She writ words upon the parchment that shall be recorded forevermore in the scrolls of Maatkara-ism.
ALL HAIL MAATKARA!
KK, awesoem poem, too. Its awesome-liscious. I love the complete devotion to maatkara, the goddess.
woot woot!
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Beautiful
My Sweet Kari
You have this ability to put down the most beautiful words and create something special...I am glad she commented first before any one else...
This was beautiful as I have a friend like that too...They just seem to get what is going on and help you through it without any issues
Loved this beautiful piece
Love ya always
Tes
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Aaaw, I only remind you of what you already know, sweety It's there inside you, always 
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