I had this happy dream of us together,
I was disapointed when I awoke, to realize I am still alone.
The blue sofa and those two matching coffee cups.
The bed that is now too-wide, someday i'll get rid of them.
You were once here, that means we had to been in love.
What happened? I tried to fall asleep but,
the song we both liked is playing, the movie we wanted too see comes out tomorrow.
I couldn't forget, somehow,
I'll make it through without you.
Since then I tried calling you once,
the man that answered the phone seemed to be nice.
Your voice when you said my name and your fingers running through my hair.
Even your brown eyes, and everything about you is far away.
Laughing together, sleeping together,
It was just us, but now I'm alone.
I want to see you once more, I'll never see you again will I?
I know that, so...
I am hoping for notthing.
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ooooooooOOOOOOOOooooooo donna likes..... A LOT... this was very emotional and I loved it so much.... Very well done... Just to let you know I plan on putting you in my twenty.... Because this was just soooo DAMN good... lol
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aww very emotional write and I can identify too as I have been abandoned in same way in the past but just recently got engaged but i live miles away from him at present but hope to move as soon as I can get my things here in order
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there's such a hint of reality, one can't help but want to console you. the part about her running her hand through your hair especially, that part made me especially sad.
enchanting write. -
Sad.................. Storm
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