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Nirvana

Your hands reach for me
in the quiet of the night
a longing so determined
that I cannot resist,
nor do I wish to.

I find you in the still darkness,
your scent of flowers calling me.
My own heart beats like a sacred drum
as our souls come closer,
two joining as one.

Wrapped tightly in your embrace,
your breath upon my breasts,
your hands sink into my hair
as your lips caress my skin
leaving a burning trail where they touch.

Your taste like a fine wine
my lips crave for more;
your hair a silken river
lets my fingers glide through
as I lose myself, completely.

As you turn us over,
I take control of you,
starting with your lips,
my tongue traces gently
over tender, naked skin
as you rise to meet my lips.

My body acts on its own,
Back arching up slowly
Begging for more of your lips.
I feel my mind swirl endlessly
As I pull your body closer.

My hand reaches for you,
pulling your manhood to me,
guiding you into me
as a wave of passion
takes control of me;
I stop, teasing you,
squeezing you as only I can,
and then,
my body caresses you—
completely,
with you inside me,
I cry out as your hands
reach, pulling me,
holding me tighter.

My hands caress your skin
as I pull you closer,into you I delve
deeper until I can feel
every part of you,
reaching the height
that is so incomprehensible
at this moment,craving you,
longing to take you higher yet
until our passionhas been spent.

As our bodies are lost in each other,
I forget where I end and you begin,
my mind is cleared of everything
except your touch,
the heightened senses,
the insanity of it all
as our lips caress,
eager and intense,
begging to continue
until our glory is reached.

This is what Nirvana must be,
all my mind will repeat
as my sight is filled with you,
your body, your scent, your touch,
the feel of myself inside you
as you bring us to the height of passion.
This is what Love must be.

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  • Angel With No Halo
    January 19, 2007
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    You both did an amazing job writing this..And for you both to be women makes it that much more of a challenge.. that my dears is why we chose this write for first place. Thank you both for entering ... again.. Beautifully done my friends!!
    ~Krys~


    • pattyann4500
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you again, Krys, for the lovely comment. Erin is amazing, and I just adored writing this with her. Thank you for the opportunity to do this with my beautiful sister. Hugs, Patricia


  • pattyann4500
    January 11, 2007
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    WOW!!!! This is a great collaboration! *whew*