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*~Handle With Care~*

 

 

A wish…
landing with a
teasing giggle upon
innocence, gazing skyward to
stars embracing little ones hopes and dreams.
Mesmerized by the Heaven's lights
certain God on this night
might hear clearly
A wish…

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You can
hear a flutter

on a quiet night from
wings of Angels swooping in to
pick up tonight’s special dreams and wishes.
Carried to Heaven carefully…
Labeled fragile, handle
with all the care
you can.

 

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Author notes

"Hate and lies"


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Heard my niece chanting..."Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight..." and this just spilled onto the page

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  • vampireblood
    May 26, 2007

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    It's funny how sometimes just little sayings give us inspiration. This was pretty good. It was short, but got the point across. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
    ~~~Vampy~~~

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