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You make me feel so old

You make me feel so old
You make me feel as though I'm growing mold
Every time I see you grin
I'm such an unhappy individual

The moment that you speak
I accidentally take a leak
When I see your body's full moon
I think my life will end so soon

You and I, are like a cloud of dust
stuck down on the floor
and beginning to rust

You make me feel so old
You make me feel my house will soon be sold
prostate test to be hold, cancer results to be told

Even though I'm not old or gray
I still feel the way I do today
cause you make me feel so old



Author notes

Written as a parody to Frank Sinatra's "You make me feel so young"

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  • Lj-
    March 12, 2007

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    Playful and sweet at the same time.

    I really liked:

    "You and I, are like a cloud of dust
    stuck down on the floor
    and beginning to rust"

    Keep it up...


  • honey bear
    January 11, 2007

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    fu write

    thank you for sharing this fun write with us,i can almost here him singing it ha ha ha keep up the good work