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questions of life

since when didi life feel so much like death?
since when did restriction become such a problem?
when did death start to sound so good?
when......
when did i lose myself?
when......
is there even a when anymore?
theres only a here and now
never when, remember, or how was
try to forget the past before it catches up with you and slowly whittles and emptys you out till theres nothings left

Author notes

ok i know this is weird and no rhyming.
but i wrote it for some reason

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  • HasIssues1
    January 31, 2007
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    : powerful shit


  • Piper77
    January 13, 2007

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    Hmm, I really like that ending. It's really well written. A couple of spelling/grammatical errors, but oh well...very good otherwise. Love it!

    *snap*


  • Da-Lyricologist
    January 12, 2007
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    it's very thought provoking