drifting in and out
aimlessly wandering about
wishing that time would fly by slower
everyone just says someone will show her
what more could happen to me
when will my mind be free
i hate talking like this
what more could i miss
drifting in and out
aimlessly wanderin about
wishing my life would take a trn for the better
but my tears only get wetter
i say my life is so bad
it makes me so mad
im not that bad off
yes ive had hard time
committed plenty of crimes
i wish i could reverse time
but i cant decide should i scream or mime
Author notes
sorry this sux
im a little rusty
Please tell me what you think
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Pretty good for the most part. A couple of spelling error, and a lot of forced rhyming. The flow however is pretty good. Keep up the good work!
*snap*
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