In my childs eyes
I am superman
In my childs eyes
I am a hero
In my childs eyes
I have no fault
In my childs eyes
I am love
In my childs eyes
I am the #1 mom
But thats in
my childs eyes
To me I have
many faults
They come to no end
bringing tears to my eyes
But all that matters is
Me in My childs eyes
Author notes
-pentibabe
A contest entry
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Comments
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Aww so sweet. I can say no more than that.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Katie -
But thats in
my childs eyes
To me I have
many faults
They come to no end
bringing tears to my eyes
But all that matters is
Me in My childs eyes.
thank you for the read.
Forever;
Scarlet -
How true.
Yes what matters is what is in your child's eyes. That must be very good indeed. A lovely poem to read and keep penning them. -
Thanks for entering!
I cna't say I know how it feals to only care about how one person thinks about you. But, it seems amazing. Great right.
Best of luck!
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very lovely , love filled write
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loved the two lines each stanza the flow was good and i liked reading it thank you for entering and good luck to you
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This is a lovely poem you penned here well done dear poet good luck in my contest
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Oh this is beautiful. You are prefect to your child because you are so loving and to me that is something that overshadows any faults. Thanks for entering such a heartfelt write. Best of luck to you.
Stabbed Rose
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This is quite sad and yet tenderly at the same time ,you have written an emotional and dedicating poem ,good luck in the contest
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thank you for entering with this very lovely write, all that most of us parents ever want is to be looked on with love by our children, good luck in the contest with this very sweet write
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This is so true ... and so heart lifting ... we all have faults ... all mothers learn from their mistakes ... you really do put that well in your write ... we can't be perfect ... and we won't be ... but all that does matter ... is what is in the childs eyes ... and how they see their mother ... very good write ... and good luck in my daughters contest ... lovely lovely job ...
Granny lol -
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Thanks
Thanks soo much i really appriciate your comment
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