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Unchangeable

UNCHANGEABLE


it's like this
my bro, my sis
none can rob me
of my bliss

I know I am one whose fate
must be bound by lifetime's wait
stuck with those who dominate
(In other words by those who hate)

The jealous ones who won't have ought
Would rather destroy what others brought--
complain forever and won't be taught
Oh they're not me , for sure they're not!

They're happy most when causing pain
They lust for that which yields no gain
Collecting tears like ponds do rain
They're septic pools who'd on me drain

Some of them will give me praise
Then focus on more hell to raise
Telling me that I'm their muse
But never acting on my views

They talk as if they understand
Use lies to gain the upper hand
Then when they think I've swallowed bait
They'd puncture me so I'll deflate

If only they could see the end
Of persons who like them pretend
For brevity sake I'll only say
All will have comeuppance day

I'm of those who grin inside
Knowing love has never died
I laugh as tears stream down my face
I stand upright, I'm full of grace

My happiness is inside made
Such that others can't degrade
In fact , you see, I'm stronger yet
When others have against me bet

For with their every curse I grow
Strengthened by this love I know
Will shield me from the poison dart
When evil tries to pierce my heart

Oh foolish evil, silly sot!
You're dumber with each evil thought!
And I grow smarter all the same
The more you play your winless game

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  • aliceramone
    January 25, 2007
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    good write...very positive message...good flow ....fear no evil!

  • Stormraven
    January 11, 2007
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    Kool !!great write , Storm


  • americanrebel
    January 11, 2007

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    Wow this is Great Glenna and i really cant be a Critic of how you write it seems so perfect when you do good job-William