Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Cheese

Nacho, mozzerella
Monterey Jack
Swiss and American
Colby, Hot Pepper

Some people melt it
Others have it shredded
Some guys go slice it
Some, like class, cut it.

Author notes

I know this poem is really lame. "Humor" is NOT my category. Please bare with me, this is really bad, I know (so please don't point it out).

A contest entry

Please don't tell me what you honestly think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • zhaniswolf
    July 3, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    ha! i totally found the humor in the last line.


  • Corinthians13-4
    January 16, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    WOW! this is pretty bad (sorry) humor definately isn't your thing. Nice try. In fact, its so bad, its funny. Sorry erin, i had to be mean. chelsea

  • Frodofan
    January 12, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Ok, Kotai - got it.

    Like Marisa has already said, cute piece. Amusing to say the least. Thanks for entering once again!


  • CrimsonxxMachete
    January 12, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    yes, please. We don't know who you are
    Yea, well I liked this. It was short and cute.

    LoL
    Love,
    Marisa

  • Frodofan
    January 11, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Can you put your name in your author notes?

1 - 6 of 6