They gathered on the hill
Clouds dark, threatening
There was no fear
Only the fresh taste of victory
Author notes
This is a picture of my granddaughter's softball team. She is the one kneeling in the middle with the softball bat. I just loved this picture, the poem is just extra.. lol
Please tell me what you think
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Great picture. Love the poses! The poem fits the image wonderfully well.
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I will always miss playing the game.. and that taste of victory at the end..
that photo is what baseball/softball is all about and so is the poem.
They go perfectly together.
I hope you're well..
It's been a long time... but I've never stopped caring about that
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That is awesome! What a great picture!
i love the poem too...
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Your granddaughter is lovely. You should cut out the poem is just extra bit in your authors comments because if it is your writing, then it is important. Even if it does feel just added on. The poem is simple and too the point and I like that post-it note quality. Sometimes you just have to say what needs to be said and call it done.
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i love this picture i can totally see how it relates to the picture and i love the image its great! thanks for sharing with the rest of us!
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This is so precious! I love the poem because it can be interpreted so many different ways. The image is just awesome I love how tough they all look there 
) Great one Becky!
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They look like young vikings, awesome lines, great picture, one for the scrapbook.
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wow
What a powerful poem ans yes a great photograph. Ready for the game. No fear which is as it should be. -
I love this poem, and the wonderful accompanying picture... Very... warlike, I must say... adorable, and emotion filled.
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Full of...
Emotion. I really like the noble feel to this piece. The picture really gives it a kick. Well Done !!!
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Awesome !!
What awonderful poem and picture. I'm not big into sports but I love watching the kids play ball. Between my own children when they were young and my grandkids, I've seen a lot of games, all remarkable in one way or another.
I enjoyed this very much, Becky
Dee
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The guy top left hand corner looks fearsome! You would not want to get into a hamburger eating contest with him! Barty is terrified!
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hmmm....a most dangerous and intimidating looking crew, indeed...no doubt with a taste as well for hot dogs and soda pop,no?? fine poem...bravo...bravo...
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Ohhhhhhhhhh..I loved the content and
the short form. Missed the 'ku by
<<<<<<<<< that....much>>>>>>> (Agent 99)
"It could have been a mountain
wherein on bended knee
a high enlisted child-star
related just.........to me ."
Oh......I know this glory and had
to add to it. hehehe.
How absolutely precious my dear!
And the snap...............eat your
heart out O'Reilly Factor...Lou Dobbs..
or...any OTHER drama factor. hehehe.
Warmly, Dianne the CookieZeal
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What a fantastic memory for your granddaughter to draw on as she journeys through life. I pray she embraces many victories along the way and just enough struggles to enjoy those mountaintop moments. You have such a blessing on the hill there. I know I don't have to tell you that but now I can speak from experience as opposed to imagination.
Love you Lady!
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actually. the poem really goes along with the picture! those girls look formidable!
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WooHoo!
Oh my, that pic is just awesome! What a fabulous shot.. looming clouds and all, lol
No wonder it inspired that perfect poem caption. There's a name for poems describing/complementing a picture.. but I can't think right now
They do look invincible, don't they!
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awesome
This is really good even if it's short. It's really good and says so much in only four lines. I really like it, awesome job. -
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Thank you for commenting on Wolfpack, its really just to get the picture up of my granddaughter's ballteam. Appreciate your visit.
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oooo Victory...yeah sometimes I wish I couldn't see any fear but only victory ahead..despite the odds maybe one day I'll be like this
Short but very powerful...
Kari
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Thanks Kari, you got to it before I even finished, lol. This is my granddaughter's softball team, I just had to put that picture up. They look so tough! All 9 yr olds! lol
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ooooooooooooooooo ok got it now It is really a wonderful picture lol they do all look very tough I do agree lol...I would have never guessed them to be 9 year olds lol lol
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