This is pain and and this is my body and you have no rights to hurt me like this. To strip naked in front of our friends and in front our childern's that's not right this worst being beat-ting to death.
My pain bring you joy and something good what do you get out of this. Rapping me is the only thing that was fun for you i try-ed to run away,but every-time you find me.
how can you say you love me and hurt,beat me and rape me as well.This is not the man married and loved you are the son of the devil you are nothing to me know.
the pain that you put on this family is worst as being berried alive. This is my pain.
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veryyyy sad
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Thanks for joining my contest
i liked it -
that your a sad woman who just found the wrong man but in a way i can relate to this poem cause i'm only 17 and ive gone through the bad parts in life but i was little when it took place in my life
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Your words have spoken many volumes on this subject & in accordance with the image here. Your thoughts show how this feels, the humility that goes with this, that lingers in the soul and very likely forever. Definitely, you've done a justice on such a horrible subject that needs to be more addressed I feel sometimes, these days. Great Job!!!! spck berried.
take care,
-fallower.
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