love is evaluated in different ways
it can be expressed verbally, physically, or mentally
it can begin with a question, a thought, or a touch
it can end with a decision, a set of wrong words, or a mistake
but one thing is for sure
love is amazing while it lasts
it helps us go through daily struggles
it helps our daydreams as well at night
it helps classes be more bearable
then how can love be officialy "evaluated"
with its crazy twists and turns
the road of love is never straight
there are too many dead ends
there is no answer
there is just love
but the real test is if you really love me
A contest entry
- If you Really Love Me by Bwaystarsoon2be.
300 points, ended January 10, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Heyy Nova!
I'm sorry I haven't talked to you in like forever!
But now I am here to comment...
I really like this... umm yeah, maybe you should write more, because this poem was really good.
Lots of love,
Annie 
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Very good job, Nova. I haven't seen a lot of your writing on here lately, but clearly the time you spent on this paid off. Good job.
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Sorry Corinne. The contest is over. Thank you for participating!
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is that pic from your bat mitzfah (sp???)
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I ENTERED AS SOON AS YOU MADE THE CONTEST!!!!!!!
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