I've waited so long for you
So long for that one special kiss
The kiss that bonds us forever more
The kiss that leads to maybe something more
I'd love to feel you close to me
No worry or cares in the world
People think bad things about me
Because of the way I think
I'm just a girl expressing desires
That have newly arisen
A dream I've been dreaming so long
For you to finally love me
For that one special kiss
A contest entry
- I want to Feel The Fiery Passion by EternalFyre.
450 points, ended February 20, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm not savvy in the love poem department. Inspiration, please :D by wat.
500 points, ended February 4, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very sweet. ^_^ I like the message that you've put out through this poem. It's something that most people feel and long for. I do think that some of your lines don't flow as well as they could. Overall, I liked this though.
Hell Angel -
This poem was so sweet and hit home because I long for that same kind of kiss. Good luck in the contest!
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this is a very good write, I absouletly must say I like it very much. I hope you keep writing and thnxs for ur comment on my poem!
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It's beuatiful. I like how it expresses the more sensitive side of girls rather than the things that we see on TV. Keep writing! I love your poems. You made a great come back!
-Confused
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Awww. such a sweet poem. Good luck with your man. LOL. sorry couldn't resist the comment.
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