Amoungst the fields of dancing meadows
There is a beautiful song being played
The footsteps of this eligant creature
Has for so long been obeyed
The horse is a creature who is everywhere
The beauty of their voices,
The song of their shoes clapping against the floor
and their gift to bring joy to those who care
They bring smiles to everyones face
They dance as the sunsets
and they run with the sunrise
They will never leave this place
Their the kindest creatures you will ever meet
Their eyes are as pretty as a teddy bears
Their fur has the same touch as satin
Open your ears you can hear their song everywhere
Have hope and faith
because the horses they care...
Author notes
have hope and faith
and i promise you that the big man will help
Ann-Marie i hope you get better
you are in my prayers
A contest entry
- Poems for a child who is diying.**More points Added** by Widowmaker.
750 points, ended January 10, 2007, 21 entries
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this is a really great poem, really powerful and full of thought-provoking ideas...keep up the good work...i hope to read more of this kind from you soon.
~Good job, my friend -
Beautiful and soft cantering of hooves
Kicking sweet snow in their wake
Whispering tender souls of Angels words
Undeniable dedicatory love for the sweetness
Of stars within a childs eyes.
Beautifully composed m'dear.
Jeffro
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