Things that were there were never spotted
You can't always make sure your t's are crossed and i's are dotted
Use your feeling don't use your mind
Use everything you don't now because it's the only good you have inside
Your mind clouds my thoughts and confuses me
You never slowed me down but you didn't see
The words were overthought but never put into your heart
And when you came to say them you fell apart
You could never see clearly what was there
Because an overthought mind only feels one part of love... Despair
Forever alone and always forgotten
The only comfort was from a blanket of cotton
You left me here because you said you had stuff to do
But I was always there and sat by you
You feel no pain and you never cared
But instead you ignored me and I was never scared
I knew the day would come because it was a horrible ordeal
When you clearly never felt the way I feel
It was a more than a year before it broke in two
And at the end I can say I was no longer in love with you
Please tell me what you think
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This was really good.
My favorite part was:
"The words were overthought but never put into your heart
And when you came to say them you fell apart."
Though 'over' and 'thought' do not make a compound word.
Good poem! -
nice
wow joshy thats really powerfull. which is differant. your are ussually kinda goofy or musefull. hope your doin gok. anywhoo, sweet poem
later
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wow, powerful words Joshy. What's it about? I think I already know but u can tell me.
s and 
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