Koara No Maachi

Koara ♥ Koara!
So cute, strawberry yummy!
They melt in your mouth
So sweet, oishii ne?

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!

Koara ♥ Koara!
Painappuru too!
Delicious, nutritious
Ambicious for more! ♥

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!

Koara ♥ Koara!There's no more today...
The box is quite empty
But the good taste still stays!

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!

Author notes

An ode to those yummy little japanese crackers in the hexagon box! ^_^

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stardazer15
May 6, 2007

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I absolutley LOVE IT!
I'm also way into Japan and anime and stuff that has to do with Japan or Asia in general. I love the japanese influence, the way to use japanese words mixed in it. I've had pocky before, is that what you're talking about? Yummy they are. Great job!
- Artemis Gem
  May 7, 2007
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  koara no maachi (march of the koala) is sorta like pocki- it s ajapanese treat that's like a cracker filled with fruity creme goodness! >.> tahnk you for you nice comment!
  
  pegleg
Phoenix-Flame
March 26, 2007
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OK
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. i really had a hard time reading this because first of all it's like in japenese or something and it had a weird lay out. you should consider revising this so that people who only read english can read it with no trouble. but it was good anyway. what is pannapau or whatever in the yellow lettering?
Chibi-chan
January 22, 2007

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Koara No Maachi
Koara ♥ Koara!
So cute, strawberry yummy!
They melt in your mouth
So sweet, oishii ne?

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!

Koara ♥ Koara!
Painappuru too!
Delicious, nutritious
Ambicious for more! ♥

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!

Koara ♥ Koara!There's no more today...
The box is quite empty
But the good taste still stays!

You must have at least one or two!
♥
For You!