Waiting to be loved,
my heart beats unoticed.
Im showing you love
but it seems that you don't notice.
Emotions run deeper as the days go by,
for love is still lost in the search for the reason why.
Tears of pain find a path down my face.
Will there ever be a time where I feel loving you is a waste?
No,
I feel in my heart that will never be the case.
Pain has taken your place.
-Won't you take my pain away.
Please tell me what you think
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nice write I know its been a while but I'm back and I had to hit up yo page just posted some new poems so check me out and holla at yo boi (oh yea and I changed my name from silent cutta to 4play in case you don't know who this is)
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Havent read any of work in a while. I really feel this one.
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GOOD JOB
It's really rare that I applaud on someone's work, but I would say this was a really good poem. So, no applaud from me, but a smile and a whistle. You can't hear it, but I am doing it in my head. Awesome write, coolchick. I wish you many comments. -
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that wasan awesme poem itwas deep and hertfelt
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