I’m setting here at my keyboard
Trying to summon the words
To describe this great, magnificent
Feelings of love
I never thought I would feel this
But I’m in love
His words, his advice
He’s incredible
He’s irresistible
There is something
His very existence
Which surfaces my inner
Most desires and emotions
There is something about him
That something is what I love
As I sit here and writing
My mind wanders afar
I long for his presence
I long to feel his softest kiss
upon my dampened skin
I know his love brings
The most delicious emotions
And heartfelt sighs
It’s like a high voltage
Runs up and down my spine
I am sure
Without a word
Without a thought
One look at him
Sets my soul on fire
How many times have I thought of him
And the many things I’d like to do
I may sound like a fool
I can’t help
I need him close to me
Filling my soul and mind
Until that wonderful day
He could be mine
Author notes
This poem is about a man I long to love, yearn to hold, I'm overwhelmed by my desire to be with him and thinking about him makes me sigh deeply...so until that wonderful day my love...
A contest entry
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awwwwwww such feelings of love you share. very nice. enjoyable to read. thanks for sharing. success to you in the contest.
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mmm I can so relate, the one I love lives so far away from me as well and I desire and long so much to hold him as well. Loved it! Good luck in the contest!
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SOUL AND MIND
My first thought is I'm envious of this person that sets youron fire and fills your mind and soul. What a beautiful write. Your words got me from start to finish and and me thinking and dreaming. When I read your poems, Gracie, I think of the love affair of Elizabeth Barret and Robert Browning.
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Abosolutely wonderful.....These words paint so clear a picture in my head of what is own you mine....the feeling you have inside of love.
Without a word
Without a thought
One look at him
Sets my soul on fire
Those words are so powerful to me....this says everything that I read in your poem. Great job Grace
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awww this was really sweet..it's hard eh? i know it too..when you love someone and you know that they love you too but seperation(space/distance) comes between you it can get you down sometimes..
Great job hun..you really said what was in your heart..great job..
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I did sigh..Sets my soul on fire
How many times have I thought of him
And the many things I’d like to do ....
thanks for this entry. -
wow; "It’s like a high voltage
Runs up and down my spine"
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