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Just Us Two

I stay with you,
A dark room so quiet,
Just us two,
Lust in your eyes,

I lean on you,
We feels so close,
Just us two,
As the time goes by,

The feeling not new,
For i feel it often,
Just us two,
Never a lie,

Happy or blue,
We stay together,
Just us two,
Side by side,

Wanting to stay with you,
Forever more,
Just us two,
Till the day we die.

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  • in-the-twilight
    March 12, 2007

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    This is really amazing and I like it! Aparantly the person it was written for did too! Great write! Rock on! xoxo Meg


  • FourMalletCapricorn
    January 10, 2007
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    Wow...

    God this made me feel it all over again.. This is fantastic. It took my breath away.