The hint of romance
filling the air,
bringing new life
to my lonely heart.
Surprisingly sudden,
joyfully accepted.
Soft candlelight glowing,
classical strings playing,
adagio tempo revealing
intensity of emotions.
Like the warmth
of his gentle touch,
the music soothed.
I hungered for his touch,
the well being he instilled.
As he walked toward me,
candlelight dancing in his eyes
eagerly anticipating the union
of body, mind, and soul,
my heartbeat seemed deafening.
He sat close beside me
inviting me with his lips,
kisses enkindling the passion
unperceived for years.
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Beautiful and senual. It was wonderful! mmm... romance...
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OOOH , this is exactly what I was looking for, thank you, so soft and just a hint of the sensual that makes it acceptable, very romantic and deep, yes yes YES!
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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BEAUTIFUL
THIS SHOULD BE A SOFT LOVE SONG FOLLOWED WITH A CANDLE LIGHT DINNER WITH WINE>>>A PERFECT LOVE POEM WITH SUCH INNOCENED AND DEVOTED LOVE,,,VERY BEAUTIFUL...
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a humdinger~
Wow sis
This poem is ringing a hum dinger on this end...
Lovely beautiful and passionate to the end...
Loved it
Love you too
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Thanks Sis
humdinger...........I love that word, and I haven't heard it for a long time. lol I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Jeannette 
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It's wonderful to see that people are not frightened of clichés...hungering for those touches, dancing candelight, kisses kindling passion. Wonderful stuff and very cool.
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Thanks for reading
Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem. I guess there are some cliches in the poem. I really didn't realize I had used them.
I am glad you enjoyed it anyway.
Ethereal Melody
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The passion and intensity behind this poem is amazing, but it's expressed in such a gentle, emotional way: Beautiful in the way you were able to pull that off! I struggle with that still, so it's great to see somebody who's so good at it. This is such a romantic write, and the scene you brought forth is a powerful one in all senses.
"As he walked toward me,
candlelight dancing in his eyes"
That line really caught me as I love the way a flame dances so gracefully as it burns...then to be captured in the eyes of lover? Amazing scene and thought there. I love this write...one of my favorites of your love poems.
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Thank you
Thanks so much Valerie. I am happy you enjoyed this one, and I am glad it did sound subtle and suggestive, and not just sexual.
Glad you liked that candlelight line. I appreciate your remarks, always.
Ethereal Melody 
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Gulp! EM, this is absolutely beautiful and so sensual. The emotion just flows so well from this write. Awesome. Thanks for sharing.
Jeannie
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Thank you
You are too funny Jeannie! I love the Gulp.......lol Thank you for reading this one, and I always appreciate your opinion, especially on the sensual aspects of the poem.
Ethereal Melody
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love and passion, arent they beautiful? we all deserve this.
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Thank you
Thanks for taking a look at this one bekah. Yes, love and passion are beautiful.
Ethereal Melody
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I can hear the ethereal quality of a harp playing gently through these words and the dance or courtship of love that takes place. Music truly inspires love and emotions, so to your words. Just lovely.
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Thank you
How did you know that I just love the harp? lol Thanks so much for reading this poem, and I appreciate your remarks. Music is truly an inspiration to us all.
Ethereal Melody
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HELLO!!!
Where's my Flamenco Guitar, this is HOT HOT HOT...with a lot of class. Wow ladies can burn passion into words. Fantastic.
-Bro.
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Thank you
Awwwwwww.......you are a sweetheart James. Yes, Flamenco is wonderful too. I love classical guitar, and most every other genre. I did see Segovia in concert twice before he died. Wow.........talk about amazing!!!
Thank you for your sweet comment. I try to let the passion flow as much as possible. lol
Your Sissy,
Jeannette 
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Wow, Lady Jeannette this is a love poem of rare beauty. I suspect it needs a sequal. lol. Chris.
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Thank you
Thank you Sir Elflord. I am happy you enjoyed reading this poem, and a sequel does sound like a good idea.
Ethereal Melody
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