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The Intensity of a Red, Red, Ruby, Red, Rose

The Intensity of a Red, Red, Ruby, Red, Rose

    Dreaming…
The naked intensity of a red, red rose has pierced me
The abject thorn-beauty
Has pierced me somewhere
    inside…
And I might bleed to death
    pierced
    inside
Perhaps I’ll bleed to death
    maybe not…

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  • Tainted Innocence
    January 10, 2007

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    Intense

    A really beautiful presentation of words, pictures...even sounds and taste. A shame no one else got it. But what can you expect from alpo? Mahal...