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The Love Scene

If there was ever a person to break me,
ever a person to make me
into someone who cares,
someone who was once so heartless,
baby thats you

If there was ever a person to leave me,
ever a person to do what i do to others to me,
breaking their hearts,
being so cold and careless,
baby, that'd be you

If there is going to ever be a time in my life
when I'd like to get married,
or have a baby,
I'd like the ring to be bought by you
and the baby to be made by you

If there was ever a guy that I miss,
that turned out to be you.
Every second of my life I'm thinking about you.
I want to be affectionate towards you, be romantic
I used to see futures without my boyfriends,
But I see you always being there
baby, theres something about you

If there was ever a person to wrap me around their finger,
then it was you
you wrapped me up tightly
now I can't figure my way out
If there was ever someone to make me so happy,
to change me world,
to make me feel like trying,
then baby, thats you

Theres something so perfect about you
You're not sure what you're doing,
But you're doing it best
Sometimes people just know how things are going to turn out...
with you,
I KNOW things will turn out good

I think you have my heart for good.

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  • angelsslayer
    August 19, 2007
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    awwww

    Lovely write. Beautiful poem all around, Really nice,


  • Dead Star--x
    February 14, 2007
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    aawwwww thats so cute!!! im so happy for you, i mean you writng love poems is rare and for ones that are as good as this and since youre with a decent guy i makes me all warm inside... which will help i gotta walk home in 10 minuites and its FUCKING cold.... fix your damn car!
    *Abused *

  • Liquid memories
    February 9, 2007
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    Sounds like love

    It appears you are enslaved to this love, which can be good or bad. Good for the feelings and caring. bad, if you are being used and taken advantage of. i wish you joy and much happiness. Jules.


  • Dead Star--x
    January 9, 2007
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    aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yay, the evil one has a heart.. hehe i love that picture by the way..
    n im so damn happy that you are finally experiancing what love is all about.
    *Sarah*


    • pixiedust13
      January 9, 2007
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      lol... i know. im not so much a cold hearted bitch anymore. but im happy for you too! u and micheal are sooo good together.

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