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Changes Expand Beginnings

 

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Somehow instincts, hopes, focus light to anticipate evolution. Change expands beginnings.  Prepare opportunities, let metamorphosis intense free self ...

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Vision clears, we’re somehow made aware

A new age dawns as instincts stimulate
Longings that at last hopes liberate.
Underlying focus everywhere
Energizes inner light, to share
Tenderness, emotions, to create
Harmony which may anticipate
Evolution understanding where,
Time time defies. Change may initiate
Insight, vision new, expands to date
Mark end of beginnings, secondary state
Extending former frontiers to prepare
Opportunities for future fair.
None need look back, let Fate precipitate
Events, as metamorphosis Hope's gate
Appears to open, expedition rare.
Refuse facility, temptations, free
THe self for new dimensions, - learn to be  ....

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External acrostic Value the time on Earth

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  • xPink-Lotusx
    June 26

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    Very Well Written!

    This piece is rather exceptional. I really like the style, its one I have a hard time with so I really enjoy reading the work of others who seemingly have mastered this style. This is very thought provoking. The flow is awesome, and the vocabulary is used very well in this piece. I congratulate you on this wonderful piece. It seems it has been well received, and this is no surprise to me. Good work here! Keep the muse alive!

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Interesting

    I think what you call Fate here is the pre-existing underlying order upon which through time (which is orderly change) the Universe is organized to develop in a pre-ordained way. (My opinion from the evidence I see.) I think Plato had it right: there obviously is the ideal configuration of everything that comes along, many things which only work right one way, inventions not formed out of nothing, but material which already has within it the ability to work in the newly discovered. Everything that is here today is due to the "intelligent design" of the elements out of which everything is made. (My opinion.)
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  • waydownuponjoy
    August 8, 2007
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    perfect

    explanation of rising above the fray and finding the peace that passes all understanding! joy


  • aboomer silver member
    July 16, 2007

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    Amazing! This was put together with a very creative talent that I would guess few possess. Wonderfully done with a great message imbedded into it. I've always thought time was an illusion man created just to keep track of events in their lives. For me, the past, present, and future all seem to exist at once sometimes....after all, a second ago is the past, as I am typing each line, it is the present, followed by the future - all so closely woven together as to sometimes appear to run together. Anyways, I'm rambling..lol.
    Great job!

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Events, as metamorphosis Hope's gate
    Appears to open, expedition rare.
    Refuse facility, temptations, free
    THe self for new dimensions, - learn to be ....


    Hey ..this is amazing and just expressive as well..I loved its presentation and the message which is just a light of your great mind my friend..well done..This is truely a deep and very sensitive write revealing the depth and intensity of the heart and feel of the muse here..The fire of truth I can see in the words here... you are very affirm to describe and to grasp the truth of life with so much open eyes of yours..a great verse is here..


  • Lute
    July 13, 2007

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    great work. you have put a lot of time into this and it shows, keep up the good work, and keep writing, the thought of time is a good one, try to savor the taste of it.

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  • crystalgodess
    July 12, 2007
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    this is amazing. I love how the first letters have a statment ( Value the time on earth ) Then the highlighted words have another statment, yet they all work together perfectely. This is beautifuly written, true tallent, something I myself can not do...Great job. keep up the great work...I will have to read more of your fine words

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