My rage is so pure; it's frightening,
Hiroshima; the bomb that blew!
Many dead,
As people look into my eyes of a mass murderer.
The fire in my eyes only grows ,
Fuelled by those they killed with a single gaze.
Shattered windows are shattered dreams!
Too bad! So sad! You alll fucking lost!
Let your ugly souls burn in hell,
I just lost my god damn mind!
My heart is colder than empty space itself,
god bless you and suffer painfully to your deaths...
A contest entry
- SCARE ME TO DEATH by thelovesongwriter.
410 points, ended June 6, 2007, 22 entries
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Comments
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I like this poem, but what would make it better is more description and imagery.
Many dead,
As people look into my eyes of a mass murderer.
I would like it even more if you described what they looked like. but overall, i can feel the hate you have. great job getting that out! good luck and thanks for entering! -
wow, there is so much anger speaking out of your words, i could feel it myself.
Great write on this sad subject,
Demi
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Wow, I've seen this before, and it still blows my mind! Like I told you, there is such a passion in your words, and it's just so awesome! The best poems come from the heart! Take care!
Peace!
Laura
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