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Loser

I remember when we were together.
Things seemed like they couldn't get better.
Things couldn't get better.

But one day, you had to leave,
Kissed my cheek, waved, and said don't worry.
Baby, don't worry.

What happened?
Something clicked, and you did me wrong.
What happened?
How long did you think that this could go on?
Doesn't matter.
'Cause I'm happier without you.
Honey, she can have you.

Peace out, loser,
Can't you see that you've been replaced?
In my mind, you're almost erased.
And I like it this way.

I thought you were my happy ending,
Now I see,
Our ending was my happy beginning,
Ain't that peachy?

You see I met this real nice boy,
I'm his princess not a personal sex toy,
Personal sex toy.

He loves me more than you could.
Things you won't do, I know that he would.
I know that he would.

What happened?
Something clicked and now I'm gone.
What happened?
Did you think I wouldn't move on?
Doesn't matter.
'Cause I'm happy without you.
Honey, she can have you.

Peace out, loser,
You really have been replaced,
In my mind, you're pretty much erased,
And I like it this way.
Yeah, I like it better this way.
Peace out, loser.

Author notes

My ex-boyfriend cheated on me, and the guy I'm with now is fantasmic. Not much more to say. Inspired by Lily Allen's "Smile" and Gwen Stefani's "The Sweet Escape". Hope you guys like it!
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Comments

  • Rihsey
    February 20, 2008
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    Why hello...


  • Aidenn
    February 3, 2007

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    First of all, thank you for entering my contest. I really appreciate it, and I wish you the best!

    loved it. marvelously put and wrote. Excellent write.