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Falsetto

An illusion that she needed to be free.

She let herself go without misery.

Bit by bit she fell,

then finally she managed, to become,

the missing part of the scene.

Her beauty, struck any man with temptation.

Her eyes the moon and the stars.......

She was 'mother-earth'.

She was tired of the glory,

the men and the drugs.

She was getting no where.

 

So she stood in the field,

letting her halo fall,

she wasn't that innocent,

not a virgin at all.

Things were different, a young woman indeed.

Found a epiphany,

she stood in the field and let herself,

become the world...........................

for she was an evil angel!

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  • leander Moderators member
    January 15, 2007
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    Ooh, I didn't see that last line coming... Surprise element is always good in poetry
    I really love the thoughts of this woman becoming the world - and because she does that, she becomes evil...
    A great metaphor to show how evil our world is getting in fact - well done


  • XExpressed LoveX
    January 9, 2007
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    Its Good, don't say it Sucks.