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~* Positive *~

 

Enslaved by destiny

                  - previously chosen -

 

Led by fate

                 - Life's trials -

 

Lessons taught tough

                           - learned well -

 

Striving for unconditionalism

                                      - working hard -

 

Climbing spirituality's ladder

                                      - one rung at a time -

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Positive Energy -

I am a conduit for universal energy, allowing me to do good and righteous things. May this pure and positive force guide my every thought and action.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 29, 2008

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    I really like the spiritual journey of this piece, how it flows so effortlessly and still maintains a balance of insight that many just never "get". Love this.


  • SandraMVeinot
    July 22, 2007

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    Short and indeed to the point....

    yes; Our enslaved led lessons are striving and climbing to the perfection of spiritual life and holiness.....

    thank you for the sharing of thes thine words with us your viewers and of course me too...


  • maa gold member
    March 27, 2007

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    oh, I have been here already ...
    but I love this poem, so I pretended not to know it and read it again ...
    by the way, has anyone ever told you that you have a strong physical ressemblence with honey bear ? seeing your avatar next to hers made me almost believe that she is your child or sister (if this is an old pic of her) ...
    don't you think ?
    one thing is sure : you're both sweet
    the honey bear and the honey lioness ...


  • honey bear
    March 27, 2007
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    ah.. i have already commented on this beautiful write, but it was nice to re-read it


  • FifthDove
    March 25, 2007

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    This provokes very deep thought and feeling. I sense there are words of knowledge between each line, unseen, to go along with the rest of them, almost as though the biggest impact is from the ones unspoken, yet felt. I am left with a feel of gladness and respect. Nice work on this piece dear poetess

  • honey bear
    March 24, 2007

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    i have a picture very much like this and would be very interested to know where you found the image.
    great write princess, i love it.


    • Celticmoon
      March 24, 2007
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      I found this picture during one of my google picture searches one night.

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    March 22, 2007

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    So different then what I am used to reading from you, yet somehow exactly what I would expect from you , hard to explain actually. Anyway I love it.


  • -Ink Artist-
    March 22, 2007

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    Profound in so few words! Simply stated, this is excellent. We truly must fight our own negativity in order to prosper in the positive. I love the staggered, structured form. Gorgeous work, my friend!


    ~Lori


  • Heavens Child
    March 20, 2007

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    Excellent write! The picture is powerful as well as the form you chose to write in. Packed with punch and very true. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 20, 2007

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    Excellent write with such truth about our life's journey.I love the way this is set out, just perfectly worded for a short word contest.
    Thank you so much for sharing
    Gaylene


  • duke of balabamas
    March 19, 2007

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    beautifully poignant. this piece works rather well. plenty accomplished in so few lines. good luck in the contest.




    DS

  • Cinnarry gold member
    March 19, 2007
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    powerful and full of grace, depth and spirituality. Wonderfully penned. Thank you for sharing this.


  • azure85 gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    This is an excellent poem, and how you said it all in 27 words is great!

    Climbing spirituality's ladder

    - one rung at a time -

    Each one is very meaningful, but this one I liked the most. You have great insight, I wish you good luck in the contest.


  • sahdana silver member
    March 14, 2007

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    positively powerful...

    positively powerful and touches deep inside...thanx so much for entering and all the best to you...peace & blessings


  • Sokarjo
    March 1, 2007

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    Fantastic. Very beautiful and uplifting... thanks for sharing it with me, dear! I really like the photo as well.


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 24, 2007
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    wow thats powerful... so few words but a great message within its word... well done
    cheers
    Jen

  • maa gold member
    February 24, 2007
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    thank you for this uplifting poem, dear "lioness" ...
    a wonderful reminder, bringing to our awareness that destiny is not something that falls on our head, but something chosen ... law of karma, cause and effect, demystifying beliefs of being the victim of circumstances ... very empowering ...
    thank you so much for this gift,

    marion

    • Celticmoon
      February 24, 2007
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      Ah I see you have found out my nick name

      I am pleased you enjoyed this. I like this piece and come back and read it often. It's quite the hard hitting for me in reminding me of much within and without of myself


  • blondone
    February 9, 2007
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    A lovely entry into this contest, words are powerful and have a wonderful flow, followed by lovely imagery, postive thinking and postive actions will take you far...thank you for your time to enter...


  • Lady-Pegasus
    February 9, 2007

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    Thank you for your contest submission. I found this to be an exquistly simple piece, so elegant and refined and is such short work, well done indeed! The picture and your line style perfectly compliment this astounding piece. It is a whole unit and I cannot bear to tear it apart to describe my favorite area, which is good for I love the whole thing. Very spiritual and deep! Best of luck to you in this contest, as in all of them!


  • Anthony-
    January 9, 2007
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    I liked the way in which these seemingly separate pieces are actually entwined and connected throughout. Your words allowed me to really think and pieces that do so are a highlight on All Poetry for me. All the best. Anthony.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    January 9, 2007

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    lovely writee to compliment the picture, My lioness. Yes you have worked hard for healing is always tough I guess only one can say about it is that all the best things in life never come easy well done

    Love,
    Master

  • deleteit
    January 9, 2007

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    It does radiate all things positive with the added touch of inspiration to the reader. Good luck in the contest


  • burdened
    January 9, 2007

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    this ia great piece, short, simpla nad sweet but very thought provoking, well done it is expressive and thew flow is beautiful. good luck and thanks for enering xxX

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