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~Humbled Love~

 

Humbled in his grace

                   locked in his embrace

 

Drowning in his eyes

                   releasing soft sighs

 

Strawberry lips of wine

                              kissing lips divine

 

Eager hands caressing

                        heated bodies meshing

 

Giving into submission

                             releasing inhibitions

 

Sharing in Love's flight

                            taken to new heights

Author notes

For Blazing White Wolf, my Master



Maybe an odd take on the picture for some but when I viewed it I saw love, tranquility and bliss.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 29, 2008

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    Ok.. book!!!! I want one, get it done! Every set of lines in this is perfection. You make me sick with jealousy it's wrong I tell you to be that perfect.


  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 17, 2007

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    Wow another great piece from an amazing writer this was a beautiful poem. The format wow and I also liked the picture you used!!!! anyways keep writing..and Im sure you will hehe


  • green mother rose
    January 21, 2007
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    this was a nice write

    Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
    Blessed Be
    Green Mother Rose


  • Blazing White Wolf
    January 9, 2007

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    This is lovely and oh my thats two pieces lately that rhymed Thank you again this is beautiful and I like the take on the picture I see something very simular just not me you have again brought a smile to my face as all you girls always seem to do

    Love,
    Master


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 9, 2007

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    Beautifully written, sweet sister mine!
    Sigh...
    Wish you all the best in this contest as it deserves only the best!


  • WarrioroftheHeart gold member
    January 9, 2007

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    Tranquility and maybe a peaceful bliss, add to that I sure love the picture Thanks for your entry, I hope he likes it.
    Soft and sensual, a very good read, good luck in the contest
    Adrian

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