From My heart
By Charles-Marks
These words from my heart
can hardly express my bond to you.
You fill a hole in life.
I am lucky that you are my wife.
A bridge across life’s valleys
and a helping hand up the peaks.
You are the companionship
that my soul ever seeks.
Your golden hair is my sun
and your blue eyes the sea.
The longer I’m with you
the more you mean to me.
My heart is yours
and my future is you.
These thoughts are forever
I love you.
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything by Welcome-To-Hell.
700 points, ended February 16, 2007, 54 entries
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this is sooo sweet. i love it. it's one of those that makes you go "awwwwwwwwwwwwww" lol. it's really loving and shows how in love you are and the detail was exquisite. i could feel the love and i could hear it in the words. it's a really great piece. i like it,.
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Beautiful, this a great piece and I'm sure your wife would love this. It would be a great birthday gift. good luck in the contest. keep up the good work.
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A beautiful poem to your wife. I loved the simplicity and imagery in this peice. The words were spoken from your heart. Thank you for sharing...Sue
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wonderfully sweet tribute to a very lucky woman!!! I do have a hard time following a rhyming pattern, if you were striving for one. If it was unintentional, perhaps swaying farther from it, or embracing it completley would suit this better. The tempo and flow, aside from that, is wonderful and this is an easy read.
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Awwwww. It was absolutely adorable, beautiful and compassionate at every level of thinking. Speaking words from your heart is always grand, so lovely. I can't get the lump from my chest to go away, so I can tell you that you've got a way with words. Even I'm happy for you and your wife and I don't /really/ know you. ^^ Odd, but true. This was so pleasing to my mind. Great write.
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This is absolutely beautiful! Words written from your heart are always the greatest gift. I am sure your wife will cherish this and all the others you've written to her. Great job! Smiles, Terry
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Beautiful great write you can really feel the love for her great rhyming and good flow you did a wonderful job best of luck in the contest
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This is such a beautiful and precious piece....flowed so perfectly and proved to be a joy to read....keep the ink flowing...smiles, Terry
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hmmm good poem it kinda confused me after you said wife lol so im guessing u made this up or its to a girl u want to be your wife lol well beautiful great job.
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