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[ A loving warmth. ]

A loving warmth.

Your soft smooth skin,
You cradle my neck you start with my chin.

Your loving face,
A long embrace,

[Here it comes.]

Just one more kiss from your adoring lips, divine
One more kiss is all I ask, just this one last time.

[Ten Seconds are up, but was that enough?]

I look at you,
You look at me.
In your eyes,
I sense a thing of secrecy.

[Is this over? Are we over?]

[You said we were to be together forever,
Why is it you don’t want to remember? ]


We were great it seemed.
But we weren’t fate.

[You turned around.
My love is leaving,
I get hit with a frightening feeling.]


[There he goes my one true love,
He walked away despite my love.]


You turned around without me knowing,
You called my name,
A clock you were showing.

8:07, the clock strikes 8.
And there we were at 8:08.

You walked towards me,
And gave me a hug.

I look at your eyes,
And there I saw the love that was in you all along.

You kiss me again, even longer.
But the jokes on me.
I open my eyes, after a minute of bliss,
This was all just a dream,
A thing to dismiss.

You aren’t really mine,
Just a cruel though from my mind.

The only thing I’ve endeavored has left me forever.
Now I just have to admit, that us,

Is a never…

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i seem to write alot about Michael...

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  • Teomni Zelitel
    February 22, 2007
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    why you dwell so continually on such an ass i will never know but regardless this was good. it was very jagged, the flow and rhyme and everything...but it just added to the overall sensation of desperation. good write hun.