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Drowning Love

The snow is falling softly
Falling on my head
The clouds are floating lofty
Up above my bed
Can you hear me whispering
Like danger is near
Nobody is listening
Darkness drowning fear.

Something comes a-slithering
Through the darkest night
Hate is all a-blizzarding
In the end I'm right
Everyone has left me now
Left me to the cold
Nobody is with me how
Be so brave and bold...

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I wrote this from feelings that I feel most of the time...

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  • JoyfulWriter
    January 8, 2007

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    Such a powerful and profound piece here.....flowed perfectly and so well written...keep the ink flowing....smiles, Terry